Dex-chan lover
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- Sep 16, 2024
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So Alina is an introvert, but when you combine that with the Japanese inclination to go nuclear and start shouting, it just makes her toxic. Sure she is very attractive, but other than that, she has absolutely nothing going for her. She is not intelligent, she is anti-social and she is irrationally angry.
The other thing annoying me is how woefully this story has been put together. Somehow, she has managed to remain undiscovered for two years, but now that the story has started, she is getting found out at every turn, and she is still not doing anything to protect her identity. While she is out during the day, her hood is not going to hide her identity, but that doesn't stop her summoning her hammer... Funny how there was no fall out from when she exposed herself to all the guards at the chalk tower. It is riddled with sloppy writing.
The other thing annoying me is how woefully this story has been put together. Somehow, she has managed to remain undiscovered for two years, but now that the story has started, she is getting found out at every turn, and she is still not doing anything to protect her identity. While she is out during the day, her hood is not going to hide her identity, but that doesn't stop her summoning her hammer... Funny how there was no fall out from when she exposed herself to all the guards at the chalk tower. It is riddled with sloppy writing.
