The story is perfectly passable, good even depending on what you're looking for.
I was dissapointed though because the promises that were set up werent fulfilled.
For some reason, the story wants to portray Kashumir as both incredibly competent and as a delicate flower that must be looked after. Thats the whiplash between the earlier and later chapters essentially.
I was expecting Kashumir, because she has been fighting for her and her sisters life since she was a kid, to be confident and assertive, but shes silent and reactive, like a typical heroine.
I suppose there could be statement about trauma being made here; but Kashumir doesnt seem to regret what she did at all nor is she haunted by it. The one thing she really wanted was a family? Which is a little confusing in how its handled.
Theres more to say here; but honestly I just wanna go read something else now