Some advice and recommendations for the typesetting:
I strongly recommend using wild words cc (or thats what I think it's called) or another comic-y font.
On page 8, second panel, use a white border, shadow or glow around the font to make it easier to read similar to what you can see on page 1.
On page 10, 3rd panel, you can decrease the spacing between the lines to fit it better. The spacing being about as big as the letters is too much.
On page 11, last panel, split lines between words and not in words whenever you can (Splitting words that would be too long for the bubble on their own is ok).
Page 13, first panel, try to fit lines better in the bubbles (For example split "portrait of deceased" with every word on its own line).
Page 14, first panel, try increasing the font size to fill the bubble out more for shouts and the like.
Page 14, 3rd panel, decrease the font size or line spacing to fit the text in the bubbles better.
On page 8, second panel, use a white border, shadow or glow around the font to make it easier to read similar to what you can see on page 1.
On page 10, 3rd panel, you can decrease the spacing between the lines to fit it better. The spacing being about as big as the letters is too much.
On page 11, last panel, split lines between words and not in words whenever you can (Splitting words that would be too long for the bubble on their own is ok).
Page 13, first panel, try to fit lines better in the bubbles (For example split "portrait of deceased" with every word on its own line).
Page 14, first panel, try increasing the font size to fill the bubble out more for shouts and the like.
Page 14, 3rd panel, decrease the font size or line spacing to fit the text in the bubbles better.