I, Who Possessed a Trash Skill "Thermal Operator," Became Unrivaled - Vol. 2 Ch. 12

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Some advice and recommendations for the typesetting:
I strongly recommend using wild words cc (or thats what I think it's called) or another comic-y font.
On page 8, second panel, use a white border, shadow or glow around the font to make it easier to read similar to what you can see on page 1.
On page 10, 3rd panel, you can decrease the spacing between the lines to fit it better. The spacing being about as big as the letters is too much.
On page 11, last panel, split lines between words and not in words whenever you can (Splitting words that would be too long for the bubble on their own is ok).
Page 13, first panel, try to fit lines better in the bubbles (For example split "portrait of deceased" with every word on its own line).
Page 14, first panel, try increasing the font size to fill the bubble out more for shouts and the like.
Page 14, 3rd panel, decrease the font size or line spacing to fit the text in the bubbles better.
 
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@ultraleaf they lied. his skill was too OP so they lied to make him less aware that he's a walking disaster (and thus attract less unwanted attention)
 
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The translation is getting better, the placement of words is improving, can see that sometimes it would be better to make the letter bold, like when they are screaming, keep up the good job
 
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First he couldn't compete with a microwave. Now he can't compete with a mini-fridge. Sad.
 
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He's fine. He's a Time Operator. He can infinitely hold his temperature at a certain level and walk out like nothing.
 
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He's a thermal regulator.

Which means he has full control of temperature from absolute zero to one million degree C.
In the next chapter or so, you'll see him create a micro super nova which literally destroys the entire mountain range.... lemme say RANGE again, as in he wipes out the ande's and causes the principal to run his fastest in order to avoid the explosion on a massive Megumi scale
 
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Honest question, why didn’t the male MC ever try on his own to see how far he could hear or cool things? I mean, if it were me, I’d be curious if first I could make it warm, then keep pushing my luck.
 
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its funny like they went from we can't let anyone know about your power to: we will make you strong so you can help us win.
 

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