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So...so cheap. Why do they tell the story this way.... ;_;
I'd seriously rather have been blind-sided by this, not this crappy foretelling stuff.
Well, at least I agree with @MoonStoneX . Another point for the memento mori jar.
Well I guess when I think about it, if the point really was to teach this guy life/death lessons, the emotional impact on the reader wouldn't be as important...but still. Could have played it up big time.
I'd seriously rather have been blind-sided by this, not this crappy foretelling stuff.
Well, at least I agree with @MoonStoneX . Another point for the memento mori jar.
Well I guess when I think about it, if the point really was to teach this guy life/death lessons, the emotional impact on the reader wouldn't be as important...but still. Could have played it up big time.