Is it possible for a story to double jump a shark? Jump two sharks? The ghost twist was pretty good and made for a better story. I’ve been binging this and have gotten pretty invested, but this mother of evil spirits stuff is taking me right out of it. First the ghost attack and now this random guy getting introduced. Without build up or anything to ground it and make me suspend my disbelief, it just comes across like he’s a chuuni.
Feels like ideas are just sort of being crammed into a story that wasn’t made with them in mind, but there’s no editor to blame since this is a doujinshi.
Hopefully the series turns itself around and these developments improve it in the long run like the ghost twist did.