@Fghdrl the angles, the come up, the come down, the chemistry (or lack of which) between the two characters. It just seemed really forced—how to put it....like a virgin drew their fanfiction and knows about the aspects of sex in theory, but not in practice, maybe?
@Fghdrl see @crossrook response too. It was just really amateur all around. That being said, I do hope they get some experience and continue their craft.