Ienai Himitsu No Aishikata (Magazine) - Ch. 13

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I really hate that "I love her first" girl. She forced her romance without thinking about other people's feelings. The teacher aside, she said to the manga artist girl that she's in love even though she knew nothing about her. The manga failed badly, but it's obvious that the manga artist girl is lacking family love; so, she didn't even have a chance to think about romance.

-start a cool cohabitation concept between an otaku teacher and a girl with tons of family trouble and emotional issues
-immediately jump into a pointless love triangle subplot with a literally who
-completely forget to develop the actual main characters and their issues
-spend all chapters focusing on the new third wheel character
-never actually mention why the MC had to run away from home other than "i slapped my stepsister once"

lol. I'm not suprised if it got axed. I don't know how the author managed to derail the main story so quickly and still get past the editors.
First three chapters were incredible.
Yeah, I like the initial premise of a teacher helping a student with a family problem. And bonus point for the plot of a yuri manga artist and her fan.

But the whole third wheel plot was annoying. Not only it came out of nowhere, it was also too early. Like we barely got to know the initial couple.
 
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the dialogue was a mess so it was not surprising that it's the final chapter
 
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i was trying to stay serious reading this, but when Haruka said "This is why yurifags are so..." i cracked my fucking ass 😭😭
Shame this ending seemed kinda rushed tho
 
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:oooo: maybe a season 2 where she appears as harem momma of multiple weird girls. Can we get a porn actress to the mix next?
 

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