Iinari

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@ JohnSmiththeAnon "Deus ex machina is a plot device whereby a seemingly unsolvable problem in a story is suddenly and abruptly resolved by an unexpected and seemingly unlikely occurrence"

It applies. "Lucky lewd moment" isn't a literary element/plot device, its just a polite way of saying the story is shit for the sake of drawing ecchi things to sell more magazines to young boys.
 
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Man that description slightly reminds me of the keit-ai thing from 4chan


@Kevadu i was with you until the last couple of sentences.
 
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oh no i feel like its not gonna have a good ending like uwakoi
 
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Fair warning: releases of the next chapters might get slower as I'm distracted byu a certain thing with letters F, F and number 14 in its title.
 
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Seems strange he had the nerve to buy equipment to spy and look up her skirt but the moment she allows it to happen he is all of a sudden embarrassed about it.
 
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This would be much more simpler if they just go out. In fact, it would be even hotter with an exhibitionist gf.
 
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@maichirex

I think it’s less of that and more of him not expecting to find out she’s an exhibitionist. He was originally just using it to listen in on their conversations. And the second time it was to see if she really wasn’t wearing any.
 
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another manga ruined by the introduction of a cuck character. who enjoys this shit?
 
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A less interesting version of The Untouchable Flower's Twisted Bloom. Go read that instead of this.
 
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I knew who the author was once I saw the art covers! I’m out! Don’t expect anything!!
 

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