Iken Senki Völundio - Ch. 4 - The Demonic Lightning Swordsman

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I wouldn't usually be this picky but Kirei Cake usually has from what I can tell flawless word choices but a couple things jumped out when I was reading in the drinking scene.

She's well into drinking and says "seconds" which I assume is translated from もう一度. I would always hear someone "one more", "another" or "Again" (if they're being a badass in a movie lmao). Even if what she said literally translates to "seconds" I don't think think fits. I can't recall ever hearing someone refer to another glass of drink as seconds, be it a house party, in a bar, drinking with family, at a restaurant, literally any setting I have never heard this.

Then when she said she was a "bad alcoholic" was really jarring. "bad drunk" or "bad drinker" would make much more sense. Possibly "sad drunk" could work as well. Alcoholic is only used literally to describe alcoholics or at most joking about someone drinking too much.
 

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