WOW. Thanks for the update! <3
Though would like to mention a few things: There are a couple of text that aren't redrawn. SFX are hard, so it's fine to not redraw them. But do put the text above the korean ones rather than on top of them. Seems less awkward. And try to redraw the narration text tho. Even if it's sloppy, it won't be noticeable coz of the text on top of it.
Also, some parts of the translation sound a little weird and/or have silly mistakes, so maybe look out for that in the future~
In any case, thanks again. Cute stuff.