Thank you for the chapter. The type is legible, the translation is clear, there are translations for the sound effects, and there are translator notes for changes done such as name changes, all-in-all, this is better than most translations. You did great, keep up the good work!
There is room for improvement, but there always will be, and that is okay. You missed some small details like you have "Rattling" on page 5, which I really appreciated, but are missing whatever Kunaria is saying on page 4. Like others said, it is uncomfortable to read on larger screens, but that may just be due to getting lower-quality scans, so hard to complain about that.
I hope you continue working on this title, I greatly appreciate it. Thank you.