In the Land of Leadale - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - First Attempt at Magic

[Cacklea]

I'm loving this pacing and world building so far, although the story seems like it might be more fluffy rather than action
which i dont particularly dislike

 

[insert_name]

I really like this type of isekai..it's detailed in a good way..the speed of the story is just right as well. I like how it's not too forced in the first 2 chapters. This is a 10 on my isekai first impressions..

 

[mfnumeric]

hmmm this is promising story...

 

[Qelix]

A bit bland for a start,...but I've seen far worse. I consider it a good start for an isekai story. She is OP and ... we'll see how this goes.

I like how the author interweaved her sensations into her analyzing her situation. Nothing I didn't already read, but embedded in smoothest way I've seen so far. It is clever and makes the MC look clever. This is a hint at some serious writing skillz. The setup makes sense. Only her being an all beloved, all good ojou-sama with dead parents, a serious disability and a rich, genius grandfather, who happened to develop a working A.I....that's a bit thick. You could create three superhero-BG-storyies or make 1.7 religions out of this. The threat of a Mary Sue is strong with her.

 

[J7tn]

This has potential to become an anime ~

 

[Qelix]

Whoaaaps....Double post. Sorry 😔

 

[FStubbs]

@Qelix most protagonists in this genre are Mary Sues.

 

[genericlinic]

thanks for the update

 

[Bakubread]

Thanks for the chapter!

 

[Chantepnita]

I'm liking this. Thank you for this update.

 

[Qelix]

@FStubbs: Can't argue that, but some are more than others.

Our FMC here has some really strong tendencies BG-wise, but she didn't acted noticeably like one. Let's hope for the best.

 

[CalamityCallout]

Awww thats it for now, already? Can't wait for more chapters!

 

[MapleTreeWithAGun]

It's not a space elevator? RIP

 

[Karsus]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[unime]

Eh? How did she not see it yesterday when she was spacing out by the window? Lolol also her eye sight... o___o
Many thankd

 

[Yurisivel]

Good start so far. Likeable FemMC, interesting starting premise, with the right amount of pacing to be able to enjoy the details of the world and learn just enough of our protagonist's backstory.

 

[berryoragami]

Thanks so much for the chapter!!

 

[Chiyamii]

Ooh i’m looking forward to seeing how the story goes

 

[Sumatose]

w o a h she was a bigshot

 

[GodGinrai]

I'm really enjoying this so far. I'm really disappointed that no one has been translating the novel, as I would love to read further into the story.