This story bounces around so much that you get whip-lash chapter to chapter. I get it that we need to have a basic understanding of where everyone is but man is it a bit disorienting switching stories and plot armors.
Speaking of plot armor the main gary stu and mary lou couple need to bang JUST to give Gamou LESS on an incentive to seal the deal with HIS wife WHEN he gets her back (you know it's happening ... search your feelings/heart). What? He Won took her fair and square and the little tagnut stole her back from him. I don't think that Gamou would be interested in her if he KNEW that the ML took the cherry right out of the pie.
Hmmm ... I just realized something. Is it bad that I remember the main antagonist name and can't even remember the ML? Nah ... It's just that his shit is forgettable, LMAO.