Interspecies Reviewers Comic Anthology: Darkness - Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - Review 6

[MangaDex]

 

[phil777]

These guys never seem to catch a rest, huh?

 

[CronosusCZ]

Crim had wise choice as always

 

[urtoast]

I didn't know that Ganmarei has contributed to the anthology. Very nice.

 

[anon763]

Where did you get "shōjō" from ショゴス?
It's a Shoggoth. Was the Tekeli-li (テケリ・リ) not a dead giveaway? I guess not, since you translated it as "hello". It's expected that the translation will be terrible when it's a simple MTL, but come on. You don't need to know a single word of Japanese to get that part.

 

[Doomroar]

The idea of a succugirl that may die after you do her once is super dumb, and extremely sad.
Specially since it is just the male drone bees the ones that have that downside.

 

[sdarkpaladin]

Ganmarei draws one of the best monster girls.

@anon763 this translator has been doing it quite often. I even had to correct an entire page for them. The only good news is that they actually hear criticisms and change to the correct ones when someone informs them.

Edit:

Okay, I caught more problems here.

Page 2:

それに変幻自在でどのようなプレイにも対応できます！

Should be: In addition, they can shape-shift so they can adapt to any kind of foreplay. (The Shape-shifting part was omitted, probably because it is kanji.)

本当？じゃーちんちん生やして

Should be: Is it true? Grow a dick. (Chinchin is slang for penis)

てけりり

Should be: Just fucking "Tekelili" how does this translate to hello? Did the translator's brain got fried or something? In addition, Tekelili is literally what the Shoggoth said in HP Lovecraft's work.

すげぇ本数！こんなディープさもとめてねぇ！

Should be: Amazing quantity! I didn't ask for something this deep!

Whoever is translating this thing, please please please go and use https://jisho.org/

At this rate, you are starting to do rewrites instead of translation.

 

[anon763]

@sdarkpaladin
I can only shake my head at the shapeshifting thing, because I specifically mentioned that to him six weeks ago as a cautionary example of MTL failing.

 

[Wolvenworks]

Crim back at it again with the power plays

 

[starburst98]

@Doomroar
Also rule for succugirl joints to be state approved is they have a magic circle that prevents pregnancy.

 

[muon]

I liked the idea of a tears+saliva mixed with her tongue shake very much.
I hope this idea caughts and becomes prevalent.

 

[daywithoutgames]

page 6 :
- elf : i wonder how one-legged races look under clothes ?
- then just go checking out mermaid girls / fish girls , they are basically the same thing .

page 7 : i guess the correct translation is : there is a risk that she will squeeze you until you are dead ( like a bee ) , or she will eat you after the act because of her insect instinct ( like a mantis , or black widow spider , ... ) .

having $ex with a bee girl is very dangerous , lol : https://mangadex.org/chapter/489940/1

 

[aloysiusks]

Mmm... cyclops+bug girl, very interesting.