Is My Second Life a Healing Life? - Ch. 1 - A Second Life

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Im sorry but the method of storytelling in this chapter feels too much like that of parkour civilization for me to take seriously. Don’t tell me what happened, show me what happened! show, over the course of a few chapters, the main character getting reincarnated, do a flashback of his memories before the new life’s body’s sickness, and then go slower. This chapter has the content of like 5 chapters crammed into one making the story feel kinda rushed and hard to get attached to
 

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