IseGure - Isekai Cheat Musou Ore TUEEE-kei Ikiri Tenseisha ni Kamaseinu ni sare Tsuzuketa Elite Kishi, Chou Gureru. - Ch. 11 - Death by Overwork

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Can our heroes escape this terrible predicament? Or will Chiwa perish from the effects of Noramoto's Stand, <<Black Company>>?

Poor Terrier and Collie. I hope Collie comes back somehow.
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Nosebleed
  • p3 10 more mins -> ten more minutes
  • p4 has a already -> has already
  • p16 immpossible -> impossible
  • p18 with this many people we'll for sure find him. -> with this many people, we'll find him for sure.
  • p21 from the get go -> from the get-go
  • p28 once she passes from exhaustion -> once she passes away from exhaustion [though maybe another synonym for "die" would work better; e.g. "expire from exhaustion" would work, but might be too exotic a work for a shounen manga; or how about "succumb to exhaustion" or "perish from exhaustion"?]
  • p39 reincar-ante -> reincar-nate
  • p46 passing from exhaustion -> [same as p28]
  • p46 Either way her only choice -> Either way, her only choice
 
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There's no way Collie is actually dead. That'd be a turn this story couldn't take. With two of the main cast being angels and one being a genius magician, even if she IS dead she's gotta be able to be resurrected.
 
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I cant get over the mob of slashers walking around in the city non stop
 

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