Isekai Craft Gurashi ~Jiyuu Kimama na Seisan Shoku no Honobono Slow Life~ - Ch. 32

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Thank you for the chapter! Mel is always precious, and she acts as Miyabi's emotional support cutie-patootie. Sad to see less of Liz, but nice to see some familiar faces return at least. RIP Karon. And yeah, safety should be everyone's #1 priority, so the blatant disregard for that in order to cut time? Shameful. Most of the higher ups were just assholes this chapter, with only Adventurers' Guild guy and Dwarf Workshop Head guy being decent people.
 
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There's so much wrong in this chapter from a logical point of view (though it's perfectly reasonable politically, so also as a story).

1) All Miyabi ever wanted from the duke was simply the permission to build it. Where did that old fart get from to reject the project based on 'costs' that none of them would even have anything to do with?
2) How the hell do these three think they are more entitled to his work on HIS resources, than he himself? That woman was grossly out of line.
3) Both the woman and the old fart were acting idiotic, antagonizing the person that has massive potential to help them progress and make money.
4) The duke acted in a half-assed manner. He somewhat antagonized the main character, but also threw him a bone. That being said, this 'bone' was thinly veiled leftovers trying to make him think it's 'too much for him to take' (despite the fact that...he's literally going to be the one to do all the real work). No matter what, if someone has that overwhelming advantage of position (Miyabi is literally able to do EVERYTHING for this project on his own, at the same time, literally no one else can do ANY of the things on this project), even a scheming and greedy noble would be more careful and generous up front.

As for what the old fart said about him getting them there and then walking off...What the hell does he think? Miyabi didn't gather them. He just wanted to meet the duke. He also didn't promise them anything. He just brought an idea and wanted permission for construction. Them wanting to literally rob him of EVERYTHING about this project all the while pushing him into major overwork is so ridiculous that the fact that he didn't just leave all the same and look for a different method, without fixed structure and thus not requiring any permission, is already more than any of them deserve.

Personally I'd leave, move to the capital and become adventurers with the girl there. There's really no reason why they have to be adventurers in that particular town. Miyabi has literally zero connection to any place in that world anyway, it's all the same to him. He just wants to be with Liz. Scrapping this project and living with her in the capitol is the easiest and fastest way for that. With his skills, he could earn a massive fortune so costs are of zero consequence anyway, and then he could negotiate with lords around on which ones would give HIM the most benefits for constructing the railway for THEM. He's the one with the actual power here.

And yes, it could get him on the bad side of nobles...but yeah. He has the power of turning the ground under a whole town into swiss cheese that would collapse said town, killing many people in the process, all the while keeping him safe and protected. He should have no actual fear of an army as long as he's prepared for it.
 
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lol lil'bitch almost forgot he is the MC. Not an out of character for a tool like him. He is so bad at utilizing his power for the things he wants, its unreal. Always in the palm of someone elses plan. So simple minded that can't even immidiately refute a setup which is LITERALLY impossible without him and can be done by him singlehandedly. I would walk out the moment i see the other two people without even having a word.
 
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4) The duke acted in a half-assed manner. He somewhat antagonized the main character, but also threw him a bone. That being said, this 'bone' was thinly veiled leftovers trying to make him think it's 'too much for him to take' (despite the fact that...he's literally going to be the one to do all the real work). No matter what, if someone has that overwhelming advantage of position (Miyabi is literally able to do EVERYTHING for this project on his own, at the same time, literally no one else can do ANY of the things on this project), even a scheming and greedy noble would be more careful and generous up front.

On this I think Miyabi didn't even need permission to build it if he built it secretly both tunnel and entrance. Why do you need permission when you use it for yourself with your technology and your resources. He didn't need to share this project at all because he didn't build for improvement of economy. He just wants a way of fast travel for his friend. And that tunnel will never be discovered till someone really lucky stumps up on the entrance.
 
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tbf, the only thing he set a strict deadline for was the prototype. Something that is never going to actually have any passengers, and no cargo beyond what's used to stress-test the weight limits. And sounded like he only want to know it works at all, so prototype also don't really need any turns. Meaning it can't really derail unless there is an inherent flaw in the design.

Honestly, I suspect even I could build a 1km long railroad with prototype-train in 3 months, alone. All I would need to do is source some standardized wood-pieces, cut it to length (2 short and 2 long - likely the long is just the original pieces, and the short is a quarter of the original piece), nail the short and long ones together such that it forms a straight rectangle of specified width, then carry and place after the last one (likely also nail into the dirt). Then get 2 rods, 4 circles, drill holes and glue together. Then put a simply frame ontop of the 2 axles. Then its power would come either from going downhill, or from having a leather/rubber band between one axle and a crank, or simply from attaching a pre-made engine (maybe a bicycle type of engine, aka foot crank?).
1km is long, yes. But is it 3 months kind of long? Doubt it. Particularly as measuring-efficiency, circular-sawing efficiency and nailing efficiency would pick up after the first month.

Then once that is done, the development of the real product can start. Everything from a magic-power based engine (likely the biggest issue), to proper standardization, ideal shape of wheels and rails, and other parts of the mechanisms.

edit: (t be clear, I am not talking about having a tunnel too. I doubt the prototype has a tunnel, since they already know how to dig tunnels)
 
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Personally I'd leave, move to the capital and become adventurers with the girl there. There's really no reason why they have to be adventurers in that particular town. Miyabi has literally zero connection to any place in that world anyway, it's all the same to him. He just wants to be with Liz. Scrapping this project and living with her in the capitol is the easiest and fastest way for that.
Funny thing is, they literally offered Liz the "too good to be true" scholarship because they want to split them up (disband the party) so Miyabi can be free to be exploited for his power by them without Liz around because he insisted to be an adventurer with Liz. If he stayed in the capitol, every plan of the sleezy Duke and his bitch daughter would be for nothing. They are really not good people. But as we can see this chapter, MC is not exactly a smart person to realize any of it.
 
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man the duke sucks,
tf he expect for the prototype to be done in half the time for? is he the expert now?
It can;t even really be called a prototype. He wants full functionality on a short distance. We are talking developing railway transport from the ground up, most of the hurdles will not be in buolding a long track...
 
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tbf, the only thing he set a strict deadline for was the prototype. Something that is never going to actually have any passengers, and no cargo beyond what's used to stress-test the weight limits. And sounded like he only want to know it works at all, so prototype also don't really need any turns. Meaning it can't really derail unless there is an inherent flaw in the design.

Honestly, I suspect even I could build a 1km long railroad with prototype-train in 3 months, alone. All I would need to do is source some standardized wood-pieces, cut it to length (2 short and 2 long - likely the long is just the original pieces, and the short is a quarter of the original piece), nail the short and long ones together such that it forms a straight rectangle of specified width, then carry and place after the last one (likely also nail into the dirt). Then get 2 rods, 4 circles, drill holes and glue together. Then put a simply frame ontop of the 2 axles. Then its power would come either from going downhill, or from having a leather/rubber band between one axle and a crank, or simply from attaching a pre-made engine (maybe a bicycle type of engine, aka foot crank?).
1km is long, yes. But is it 3 months kind of long? Doubt it. Particularly as measuring-efficiency, circular-sawing efficiency and nailing efficiency would pick up after the first month.

Then once that is done, the development of the real product can start. Everything from a magic-power based engine (likely the biggest issue), to proper standardization, ideal shape of wheels and rails, and other parts of the mechanisms.
Sounds like the handcar.

I'm not sure why its a link and not the picture..
 
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Yeah that is honestly what I initially imagined when I started writing. Until I midway realized that I have no idea how complex it would be to make such a mechanism myself, or if it would even work when made in wood. So I instead I decided on something simpler (i.e gravity on a downhill slope) to be certain I were keeping it within the "3-month" time-limit and the "myself" skill-limit.
 
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Yeah that is honestly what I initially imagined when I started writing. Until I midway realized that I have no idea how complex it would be to make such a mechanism myself, or if it would even work when made in wood. So I instead I decided on something simpler (i.e gravity on a downhill slope) to be certain I were keeping it within the "3-month" time-limit and the "myself" skill-limit.
Honestly, there's quite a bit of manual machinery that used to be fairly simple. Old foot pedal sewing machines, foot pedal lathes, wind powered grain mills. All fairly simple mechanics. I guess Miyabi's wooden train sent peoples mind onto modern trains. I wonder what it will actually look like.
 
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"You overstep your bounds."
No, witch, you are the one overstepping. You are not the one with the monopoly on knowledge, plans, and the like of this technology, you have no contract for it, no share, no nothing, MC is. So if you don't want to explain to your whole ass guild how you left them out of a whole ass new field of earnings, you should be sitting down yesterday.

Same for old dude and even the duke. Seriously, I had said before that Miyabi would get insta-fleeced in a tourist trap city, but man, he was about to get fleeced here too... and he still somewhat has. Hopefully, he manages to patent the crap out of everything just to stick it to them. Tho, as a writer, I can totally see old dude and witch messing with him on that side as a lil side arc.
 
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Why is building a prototype train the test? Make digging the entire tunnel the test. At least that way you have something that can actually be used with current transport means and it's the hardest part of the entire project. If you dig the tunnel, even if the train fails, you still have a usable tunnel that shortens travel time and makes travel safer.
 
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Why is building a prototype train the test? Make digging the entire tunnel the test. At least that way you have something that can actually be used with current transport means and it's the hardest part of the entire project. If you dig the tunnel, even if the train fails, you still have a usable tunnel that shortens travel time and makes travel safer.
i mean they literally did say as a matter of law, no interstate infrastructure projects can be started without an intrastate proof-of-concept project. legally they're not allowed to dig the tunnel
 
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i mean they literally did say as a matter of law, no interstate infrastructure projects can be started without an intrastate proof-of-concept project. legally they're not allowed to dig the tunnel
What's there to prove with a tunnel? Tunnels work. We all know this and they clearly know tunnels work.
 

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