Isekai de Saikyou no Tsue ni Tensei shita Ore ga Iyagaru Shoujo wo Muriyari Mahou Shoujo ni P suru! - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - What's your name?

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I won't hate an exhibitionist if they have a good body like this.
 
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In both chapter 2 and 3 there are several of a very similar mistake, where you're just repeating phrases or words of similar meaning in a bubble. I can somewhat understand spelling and grammar mistakes, but how does something like this happen so frequently? Maybe try a little proofreading.

a few examples:
ch. 3, pg. 1, panel 4 bubble 1 - "Hey hey, that's not peaceful at allhey hey, that's not peaceful"
ch. 2, pg. 11, panel 1 bubble 1 - "I have to restrain stop her!"
ch. 2, pg. 16, panel 4 bubble 1 - "You have the -love- to feel empathise with other people's pain"
 
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Nice fanservice and the author does not fear the nipples! 😋 😁
 
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I'm so hard right now.
My nips that's.

Thansk for the chapter XD
 
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Honestly, I'd prefer this manga to be more wholesome and less fanservice-y.
It'd very likely still be good if the story simply presented a "What if instead of a 'Hero', it was a regular Magical Girl who was saving a fantasy world?".

The author decided to add a few rather unnecessary twists imo. In fact, it'd probably be even better if the current MC wasn't the MC, but really just Walpurga's sidekick and Walpurga were to be the actual MC and the character whose point of view on the whole story was presented.

Though I guess that, at that point, I'd basically be almost asking for a completely different manga then...
 
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This chapter felt kinda rape-y, and not in a good way lol. The concept is good, the plot is pretty decent, the art is good, and the characters are pretty likable, but there is sooooooooooo much fanservice lol
 
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its so painful to read this thing... i like it but can the mc who flipping created the magical dress be more covering than literally underwear... worst that the girl is getting depressed from it... but i like that the mc is trying to be considerate... but too bad his cosideratness came too late and now the girl HAVE to go fight the demon lord just because pple now know her identity... or maybe author wont do that :shrug (the girl have to in order to continue with the story... so it doesnt matter)
 

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