In both chapter 2 and 3 there are several of a very similar mistake, where you're just repeating phrases or words of similar meaning in a bubble. I can somewhat understand spelling and grammar mistakes, but how does something like this happen so frequently? Maybe try a little proofreading.
a few examples:
ch. 3, pg. 1, panel 4 bubble 1 - "Hey hey, that's not peaceful at allhey hey, that's not peaceful"
ch. 2, pg. 11, panel 1 bubble 1 - "I have to restrain stop her!"
ch. 2, pg. 16, panel 4 bubble 1 - "You have the -love- to feel empathise with other people's pain"