The typesetting is nice, but this definitely should have been read one more time before being posted. You referred to the wraith as "his", "her" and "them" in the span of 10 pages, not even demons can be so progressive
So, you gotta look at the actual pictures if you don't know who they're talking about when doing a first-time translation.
Either that, or learn the difference between male, female, amd neutral pronouns in English.