Isekai ni Kita Boku wa Kiyoubinbode Subayasa Tayorina Tabi wo Suru - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

[MangaDex]

 

[reader67941]

The old font was easier to read, and it's already established as the "Manga Font", so it's probably easier to adjust to.

 

[xyzfogottenme]

Im -> I'm
Uhhg -> Ugh
happedn -> happened

there away check -> there a way to check

..... Slow down and do a bit more proof reading, you can even throw paragraphs into Microsoft Word Online (https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/microsoft-365/free-office-online-for-the-web ) set it to English and it should not only correct nearly all grammar errors but a few of these broken sentences too. Red for misspelled words and blue for weird sentences.

 

[Miserys_End]

Manga is moving way faster then the WN. Frankly too fast. It doesnt just skips over all the solo training he did, but also forces the two MCs together with little to no effort... honestly the whole story just feels rushed.

 

[omecool107]

thanks for the chapter.
If you're having trouble with the proof reading you can use https://www.grammarly.com/

 

[Lorexen]

Hello all, Ive bought MS word and a membership at grammar. So ill be using that to proof read from now on.

 

[Korsai]

I think you're doing a good job over all, but I think that you could use the assistance of a QC (Quality Checker) to clean up some of the grammar and other similar issues. In terms of the font choice, either one works in terms of "readability", but I personally like the older one, as it felt a bit "softer" and you could more easily blend other "special" fonts into the mix when circumstances call for it. This new one feels a bit too "heavy" for my taste, but this is your project and the final desicision is up to you.

 

[Solaz]

Why did she leave off the mask thing when they were in the woods?

 

[Gravewind]

The first font was better. Also, I hope you learned the difference between a pact and a pack. Seems like you got it right the last time you used the word.

Thanks for your efforts translating this. I spent a lot of time reading this on the Tiger Translations site so I look forward to reading more of the manga version. Arigato!

 

[Noctelis]

I like the fact that while Daniela is cute, she looks pretty normal compared to those over the top female heroines in other isekai manga's

 

[Otakuman706]

Wooo🍻
Thanks for the release man😁
Keep up the good work👍

 

[yUYOhana]

Thank you for the chapter ^^

 

[Gladiator02]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[sambenmaggie]

Keep it up mate!

 

[Add1152000]

So for a moment seemed like something happened in the forest but nope back in town now lol
That was a weird moment, I had to check it over several times to see if I missed something

 

[HiraOmnibus]

This author's fight scenes are still really stiff considering this is a pretty battle oriented story

 

[Fa-271]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[Lorexen]

I have gotten a proof reader and a typesetter. Thinks should once again improve from here.

 

[ShionSinX]

bothing = bothering
me equipment = my equipment

You need a proofreader, some phrasing issues here and there (that are only like that in English).

Dont. Ever. Use. Serif. Fonts. They are just not meant for this kind of thing.

The text positioning is better already, thumbs up. Can get better, some long texts are too high on the balloons.

And you should rename the chapters as like 2.1 and 2.2, "x.5" are for the extra chapters that come with the full volume (when there are any extras). Fuck other websites, if you are using MD as your main place to post only care about it.

EDIT: and as I was posting this I see you already said you got more people, nice! Still dont use serif fonts.

 

[dextersTomato]

> "Jack of all trade. Master of None."

If you are an office staff, you can climb until Senior Manager, and never will gonna climb up...