whenever I see "donators" and "MTL" in the same sentence I can't help but feeling taken aback. How are there people throwing away their money on MTL? You can do as much proofreading as you want, but you won't be able to get the right meaning no matter how hard you try (and it really shows in some parts of this chapter).
As the user above me said, there are most definitely better series to dedicate your time to, but hey, to each their own.