Isekai Ojisan - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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I could fuckin cry.
I KNOW THAT FEEL, MAN!
I will never forgive S*ny for bringing about Sega's downfall and inventing casual gaming for the mindless masses!
The 16-bit generation was a better time. There wasn't that overwhelming sense of complete capitalist whoring ruining the industry back then as the target market were assumed to just be kids and geeks. Things all started going downhill during the 32-bit era... =(
Those S*ny bastards should have just stuck with making music-players... but they just HAD to start marketing games to everyone, their grandmother and their dog. And they weren't even making their own games. Just buying exclusive rights to most of the 3rd party developers with their walkman fortune like a bunch of uncooperative, cheating shits.
 
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Okay, WTF is up with the straitjacket collar? Is that the new trend in Japan or something?
 
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I'm still...undecided with this manga. Tags, Comedy plus TRAGEDY? Oh boy...
Artstyle seems...dark?

And premise may be funny, but I feel the introduction was lame.
He JUST woke up, was talking in a funny language. "Japanese! I'm finally back from the Whatever world". "I'll show you evidence I went to another world".
Uh... how about a bit of setting? "Wait, I was in a coma? But I was in another world". Y'know, how about TELLING him that you were in another world before telling him you'll show him EVIDENCE that you were?

It's like I go to a random person on the street and tell them "I'm gonna show you evidence that R. R. Martin speaks 5 languages". Shouldn't you lead with something along the lines of "Hey, did you know that R. R. Martin speaks 5 languages?" and THEN present the evidence?

Many of you may say that it's not important, but I don't know, it's how you present your story... If the very first chapter feels lackluster, or rushed, or gritty somehow...it's a bad start.
 

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