Sadly the translation seems to be worse than the one the anon on /a/ made from korean.
Compare: https://desuarchive.org/a/thread/199007044/#q199011505
Several bits are weird/looking wrong,even if I think I saw a bit that was improvement. Overall, the JPN>KOR>ENG is vastly superior. (Though I still have to say thank you to the author, for this!)
Awwwwww.