She can suck him another wayA nice start, I'm interested to see where it goes.
Though I wonder how quickly that vampire biting bit will get old.
Most Isekai stories usually are.Hoo boy this just is ADHD writing isn't it?
Ah, good, I felt that way as well. I was worried my own ADHD was haywire.Hoo boy this just is ADHD writing isn't it?
Not until she's a granny apparently...She can suck him another way
I mean to be fair, he is also the reason why magic was lostADHD is a good way to describe this.
The fact that he causally invented a time machine and accidentally got branded as a demon king is pretty funny. But the execution of the whole thing feels pretty lacking.
At least some take the time to build up the story and the world. Instead we got bombarded by things right away in quick succession. Some of the better isekai stories at least take their time for some things. This was everything in a few panels.Most Isekai stories usually are.
That's going to be tough for the writer. They'll have to fire off constant gags, reactions, misunderstandings, action, slapstick, etc constantly within a chapter. That is not easy to do.Interesting but moving little fast, i wondering will the pace keep like this