Isekai Yururi Camp - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.2 - The Other World

[Doenyon]

builds an entire modern house with just a spell
somehow needs to struggle because he can't make a fishing line

 

[EchoGirl]

I wish these gods and goddesses would give the MC general knowledge. Was the deer a protected species? Can he just build in the middle of the forest?

there are some that ask for knowledge or at least reading/writing the language but maybe some ppl just skip over that with lore dumps or someone making a series assuming you've read other isekai before lol (or being able to talk/check in now and then without demanding an offering like campfire cooking does)

 

[Dwarfy2k]

ch1 and we already have some evidence of bad writing. Also that deer would be rotten it ain't fully submerged. Another also is hearing some offhand remarks and killing, gutting and all that are completely different. I hate that the house just got "made" like this makes no sense he can just now make anything so long as it's wood?

Also why didn't he make the house closer to a water source? He also wanted a easy farm life but they dump him in the middle of a forest (I guess to follow the template all these series have?) where he'll go insane from cabin fever?

Finally a bugbear I have I dunno if its a translation thing but he's not going to enjoy his new life, they transmigrated him so its a continuation.....

 

[Dwarfy2k]

On reread like people said, he can make windows with glass but not tatami's and furniture like beds?

 

[Seinvolf]

Thank u always for ur great work...
^^...

 

[Pinnaclen]

author cranked the bullshit to 11

 

[Callidus]

Is this dude a robot? He sure does seem to talk like one that's trying to figure out how to be a human. "perfect for quenching my thirst" "wild game is tough" "I'll never let go of high protein, low fat!!" "The sun's really tilting" nobody talks like this. In fact, to make this simple, how about the author just have our MC shut up? We don't need a narrator. It's a visual medium, and we have eyes.

 

[Nibelcol]

so the guy died working hard for his family and he didn’t asked a single question about them? Not even a though? I mean now that he died the family probably lost their main source of income and he’s not worried a single bit? Lol