First 2 chapters were alright, choppy flow along with a not-very-engaging context, but wasn’t too boring because there’s actually a unique setting.
Third chapter is a complete letdown, stiff interaction between characters that creates a choppy flow once again. Thoughts and actions are very obviously shown which makes everything seem even stiffer. Generally, panels where the reader has to think to understand are sprinkled around to make the story more engaging and interesting. Without them, it feels somewhat boring. More setting is revealed, but it doesn’t seem well written. Presentation is average, but the writing from the start is just plain bad. Flat, 2D characters that are probably quite important to plot and help move the story along later.
Tried to write in a way that wouldn’t spoil anything, but sorry if even this is too much. I thought this had potential, but now it’s going in the dropped manga pile. Bye.