Itoko no Onee-chan ni Amaechau? - Vol. 3 Ch. 25.3 - Illustration Gallery + Extra Pages

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Regarding p4, "'cause" and "so" are redundant; you can structure the sentence to use either one, but using both is not correct. Probably a typo, but just to be clear.
Also, "it's of your onee-chan" is far enough from how anyone talks that it took me a moment to parse. You lose out on her calling herself "onee-chan", but I think "it's mine" would be far more clear.
 
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Thanks for your work!
Regarding p4, "'cause" and "so" are redundant; you can structure the sentence to use either one, but using both is not correct. Probably a typo, but just to be clear.
Also, "it's of your onee-chan" is far enough from how anyone talks that it took me a moment to parse. You lose out on her calling herself "onee-chan", but I think "it's mine" would be far more clear.
I translated these pages about a month ago and probably forgot to check if they were correct. I think I'll fix this tomorrow (let me know if there are any other errors).
 
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I translated these pages about a month ago and probably forgot to check if they were correct. I think I'll fix this tomorrow (let me know if there are any other errors).
Understandable X'D
Those are the only things I noticed
 
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