I like how this. It’s short, but still manages conveys the story and emotion through the use of visual elements. Specifically the text bubbles. Unfortunately, this makes me wonder – if the story stays true to the title, how will the pov character execute the revenge? Will it be something wholesome? Or typically the type a revenge is notorious my known for?
On a darker twist, what if she is just being gaslit? Getting the pavlov? Make her dependent then dump her.
Then worse, what if the reason she is being bullied, is thanks to pov character anyways? Imagine. You think you’re following a wholesome story before finding out you’re also the asshole behind it.