Jigoku Sensei

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Kind of interesting. But I feel would need at least around 10-chapters of this Oneshot length to probably convey it better. Things are established and the resolution happens so rushed. Even more, then is typical for Oneshots. Really though, I just like to think of a story centered around the ghost of the sister following the MC and seeing how her death caused so much trouble. Either as a comedy or a serious thing. If it was less serious, then it'd be kind of funny and interesting if the sister was reborn as her bully daughter. That itself would be such an interesting story concept.
 

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