Jiisama ga Iku - Ch. 20 - Grandpa and the Drops of the World

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Chapter-name wise, I think you did an apt name as it's trying to refer to how our interactions change the world, but sime other options (that kinda sound lame in my head,
Grandpa and the butterfly effect,
Grandpa and consequences of existence,
Grandpa actions and reaction of existence (too long),
Grandpa and the ripples of life,
Grandpa and causality, etc...
From the names I listed, i think what you chose fits the best.

Thought of another, Grandpa and the ripples through causality
 
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Your translation is pretty damn good, mate. There's just some small and subtle things like the turtle chasing text that is a bit off, maybe a few other things that feel a bit out of place (like they might've been lines for slightly earlier speech bubbles, etc) but those are errors you see in non-MTL translations all the time, too.
 
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