It was a good choice to switch perspectives from the guy to the girl. Like, I know he's supposed to be a bland and uninteresting character, but it makes any scene the female lead isn't in very boring. I hope it sticks with her most of the time.
You could probably read the whole thing in five minutes, but each chapter is an entire arc of a normal romance story. It’s almost like this is the spark notes for a 50-100 chapter story.