I hate how the "Fray is an idiot" is so forced. She evacuated the people and destroyed the circle, but the MC still needs to find faults with her because that's supposed to be funny.
"What if there was people left when she destroyed the graves?", he said, but we can see she only destroyed the circle perimeter, which is a small enough area that you can see if it's empty at a glance, and the rest of the cemetary is untouched.
The MC behaviour is like a mother-in-law looking for traces of dust everywhere to blame their daughter-in-law, to find any excuse to criticize instead of compliment. That's not making Freya look like an idiot, that's making him lloks like a biased jerk.
"What if there was people left when she destroyed the graves?", he said, but we can see she only destroyed the circle perimeter, which is a small enough area that you can see if it's empty at a glance, and the rest of the cemetary is untouched.
The MC behaviour is like a mother-in-law looking for traces of dust everywhere to blame their daughter-in-law, to find any excuse to criticize instead of compliment. That's not making Freya look like an idiot, that's making him lloks like a biased jerk.
