Fair. Often I just leave SFX until later if I'm unsure what to do with them. Like on page 5 I was thinking something like, 'Do I want to just write turn/twist for this or can I come up with a noise for it?' and eventually I just forgot to change it at all. Anyway, all 3 offending pages in this chapter should have at least something next to them now.Thanks for another chapter.
Some feedback, SFX is all-or-nothing. When it's done partially, it's a bit jarring to read.