We need more fan stories taking place in the JoJo universe. Since in JoJo there are stands everywhere and villains everywhere.
After reading, I had some critiques: the story and the introduction to the protagonist are perfectly fine, but the translation into English and grammar could be worked on.
The most common problem people talk about when it comes to translations is being too different from the original or not haveing sensical grammar. I prefer good grammar, it makes it easier to read in most cases, sometimes to have a sentence make sense in English you have to slightly twist the translation to have proper grammar. (It's just my opinion, don't feel insulted whatsoever.)
I do highly encourage people to read this story, and I also highly encourage people to write their own stories. I'm not very good at storytelling or drawing, so I'm not really cut to make a good story. It makes me so glad that someone went out of there way to make a creation based in my favorite universe.
When I first heard about JoJo, I thought it sounded stupid. If you look at me now, you can tell I'm a fan, I actually just finished watching part 5 and started reading part 6. I thirst for more epic stand action, Moscow Calling has tons of potential for being an amazing story that could encourage others to make more stories in the JoJo universe. The possibilities are truly endless in the JoJo universe!
Note: Georgiy is an amazing character.