Having been 14 version of this chapter, I'd rather have other group take over this, some sentences feel weird( Chika about the gifts having 100% of love and enthusiasm(or whatever emotions you want to put there) converted to "did you buy separate gifts?", Iino's comment about "something expensive she might hate" where all the other versions made it clear that "if it's something expensive then Fujiwara CAN'T hate it", the sfx are almost completely ignored and there's still some untranslated sections like in page 15 and 18.
Yeah, I'm being nitpicky, but versions like Tsukinara, Zaibatsu and Potato raised the bar by quite a bit
Even SSSS and SmileyGuy could enter that category with their correct treatment of the sfxs in their version
@Magnwn
Yep, they feel a bit weird for me too