hmm, i have some problems with the story. it's kind of inconsistent. The MC gets broken up with because she doesn't have a strong laugh and she is a dark mage instead of a healer, and yet she smiles 24/7 and the first thing she does is change her class to level 1 healer. What is the point. also, the game that she's in makes no sense. there's 1 tank and very few healers. The side characters are all kind of maplestory characters, which is to say they're very direct. overall, very flat, to me. but this may be a true shoujo. The mc's thoughts feel invisible, and the only time she experiences a second of a considerate emotion she is rewarded for it. It's just imagine if she wasn't her, right. This story would be better if she just wasn't isekeid and stayed a dark mage, and took over the country.
also, the MC's hair is insane to me. It's a shoulder length a single track of waist length extentions sewn in.