Well, I honestly am not going to promise that I'm going to provide a great improvement with typesetting and the like (although I do use larger, more readable comic sans given that I did have some trouble reading some of the small print), but I noticed some of the names kept changing and the English was riddled with spelling and grammatical errors. It was readable, but incomplete and I thought I'd give it a go to do it better, especially because this is one I very much want to read.
I appreciate everyone's patience and I hope anyone who follows along will enjoy it.