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Where to even begin with this one...
Okay, while the idea of "mortal raised by god/s" is rather old and has potential (but it has to be knitted carefully), the obvious paralelisms with Saihate no Paladin are painful to watch. It drops the interest to a minimum.
Also, I really hope those 4 are not the only gods in existence. A god of swords, but not lances or kukris? A goddess of healing, but not apparently medicine? A god of magic has a pass depending of the origin and nature of magic (I know one of those which is evil), but a god of OMNIPOTENCE?! Why do the rest of the gods even exist, then? Sigh, I've seen rather weird pantheons, but this one is directly badly done.
The authors of many fantasy settings need badly a crash course on worldbuilding. Seriously.
Okay, while the idea of "mortal raised by god/s" is rather old and has potential (but it has to be knitted carefully), the obvious paralelisms with Saihate no Paladin are painful to watch. It drops the interest to a minimum.
Also, I really hope those 4 are not the only gods in existence. A god of swords, but not lances or kukris? A goddess of healing, but not apparently medicine? A god of magic has a pass depending of the origin and nature of magic (I know one of those which is evil), but a god of OMNIPOTENCE?! Why do the rest of the gods even exist, then? Sigh, I've seen rather weird pantheons, but this one is directly badly done.
The authors of many fantasy settings need badly a crash course on worldbuilding. Seriously.