Kamikakushi no Eden - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - In Spring, The Peach Blossoms Bloom

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Thanks for the consistent translation releases. It’s impressive considering the length of each chapter, especially when shorter series can sometimes take a month or more to translate.

The characters’ forwardness is intriguing, despite its borderline-H nature, it’s worth reading. The art style is a good blend of simple and interesting. The author balances ‘tasteful’ and ‘fanservice’ well, we are getting characters with clear goals and motivations compared to S&D which was centered solely about the MC. While the protagonist’s coercion of women was a major issue there, that story managed to avoid an ever-expanding harem and lack of focus compared to the original LN (if its readers were right).

While I can see how this might end in an harem, I feel like the edge of the author hasn't been tested yet, if he is willing to kill or wound any of the characters, plus there are various ways in which the story could be explored, we just got introduced to a girl who was already interested in the MC.

In conclusion: while it has wish-fullfillment I think it takes lesson from the artist's previous work and makes me look forward to how he will evolve his writing in 10 years or so.

Man just rawdogged his cousin. What's next, his sister?
Somebody is bound to say "he is not beating those allegations"
 
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Yeah, the MC won't beat the siscon allegations, except with his dick. :dogkek:


I think the author was testing the water with the MC banging his cousin with no hesitation. Once his sister come into play, as soon as she says it's O.K. to have sex in order to escape, there will be no stopping the MC...

But anyway, I think it's a neat conflict that the cousin doesn't want the MC have sex with Shirai. In her perspective, the MC is getting taken advantage of for the sake of a person's revenge and seeing his reputation in the school is already in the gutter, the cousin couldn't stand that. But I wonder how Shirai will respond? Maybe she will tease the MC to test his commitment with his cousin before gaining legitimate feelings for him.

Also for Shirai's revenge, I assume the monsters, or an entity connected to them erased her parents, so she looking to find a way to destroy them.
 
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I'm torn in that she's his cousin but she atleast cares for him compared to shirai. Doubt MC is that much of a siscon, his rep is because only he remembers her.

The eye monsters did they need an onlooker as well as oral? Or does meeting one requirement only work
How Kinky/fetishist do we think the author will push those monsters? Seems unfair to require bondage from rando's who enter the gap with no tools to fulfill the request.
 
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I already knew that Momoka will probably going to the endless gap with Hinata and Shirai but i didn't expect that she will be his cousin.
Well, i personally hoped that the out going ritual is going to be a threesome seggs
but we got cousin fucking instead.
Well, it wasn't that disappointing

But keep hopes my degenerates friends :meguusmug:
I know that this is going to happen :pepehmm:
 

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