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Kaminaki Sekai no Kamisama Katsudou - Vol. 8 Ch. 42 - A Story About A Girl Generating Her Own Electricity In Another World
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Like which one? I notice it's messy and feel stiff, but I miss the error.
Lot of things that don't sound right and there's a lot of errors in the later pages
If you want a huge list:
Page1: "I want to research about the trade of the imperial capital" (I want to research the trade of the imperial capital)
Page1: "It would be impossible to produce enough food to support that entire population" (support the entire population)
Page8: "I will give you the instructions later" (I'll give you instructions later)
Page14: "How about you tell me why you keep an eye me?" (How about you tell me why you're keeping an eye on me)
Page14 (SAME SENTENCE EVEN): "What did that guy told you to do it?" (What did that guy tell you [to do]?)
PAGE14(LETS GIVE IT UP FOR ROUND 3): "What it's going on?" (What's going on?)
Page19: obvius (obvious)
Page23: "has the same face as summanus" Not really a grammatical error since it's a continuation of the previous speech bubble but for clarity, why not restate "She has the same face as summanus" or "they have the same face" to make it obvious and cleaner who they're referring to? Or use ... to trail off on the previous bubble to make it clean it's linked statements? Less of an English mistake and more of a poor quality control issue
Page24: alredy (already)
Page24: "We exist since the founding of the empire began" (we existed since the founding of the empire began)
The number of contractions that are missed (They'll, They're, You're) when they get the easier and obvious ones (I'll, won't, don't) etc etc.
There's also the point of where they're splitting words, PARASI-TE reads much stranger than PARA-SITES and understa-nd? Not under-stand? Seriously?
Overall, pretty low quality.
