Kankaku Kyoyu Maid-san! - Vol. 2 Ch. 17 - Final Chapter

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Well it's nice to have closure on this it but didn't seem to get to explore everything it wanted to do though. It feels like the whole "daughter wants Chloe" plot line didn't really go anywhere. I did enjoy all the teasing and sexy antics but I wasn't as much of a fan of the psuedo masturbation between the twins taking up so much focus (yeah I know it's the title of the book).

A mixed bag, but I'd still pick it up if there was phys in english.
 
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It was alright, clearly rushed the end a bit but a good read anyway.

Was hoping for some more mother x daughter action too if they are already fine with a pseudo 4some going. :smugchisato:
 
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So, does that mean Sophia will always know when her daughter is getting heated with Mia? Similarly, will her daughter always know when her mum is getting it on with Chloe? At least as long as they're close to each maid.
Presumably . . . though I don't think any of them see that as a major issue, because (as we all know, being people of culture) twincest is wincest . . .

Or something.

I definitely think it could’ve been longer, there are still a few things that haven’t been fully resolved. It was fun, but still a shame though
Yeah, fun, sexy-cute, and a bit unsatisfactory - it felt like a oneshot focused on the sexy-cute that got serialised without enough thought being put into the plot. Not a bad read at all, but it does feel like it could have been a lot better. It does also feel like it may have been cut short, though I wouldn't hazard a guess as to whether it was actively cancelled or just given strong hints that ending soon was a good idea.

Taking the core ideas and redoing it with more careful plotting and so forth would be fun, though I suspect the result would be quite significantly different - it could be tighter, with less extraneous bits stretching things out and more time spent on the core, or it might expand on a few key things (Sophia's past relationship with Korn had the most room for exploration, I think) and maybe reduce the focus on the twincest a bit. Or it could just sprawl out of control, of course, but that's where more careful plotting comes in . . .

Honestly, this is a common issue with not just manga but with any serialised storytelling - once parts of the story are public they're effectively set in stone, and everything that comes afterwards has to fit in those constraints. That leaves no room for fixing things, or going back and tweaking earlier parts to suit a new plot idea that came along, or just removing a plot element that ended up being a dead end. The only way to work around most of those issues is by piling more and more on top, which is probably a lot of the reason so many manga end up such sprawling messes (not to mention web novels and things derived from them).
 
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The ending felt rushed but at least it had a happy ending.
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Thank you for the chapters and the series.
 
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it feels like they kept teasing a full sex scene but never went all the way for... some reason? which is whatever but.. i mean a series like this kinda feels empty without at least one to finish it off. oh well, it was a fun ride
 
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Well it's nice to have closure on this it but didn't seem to get to explore everything it wanted to do though. It feels like the whole "daughter wants Chloe" plot line didn't really go anywhere. I did enjoy all the teasing and sexy antics but I wasn't as much of a fan of the psuedo masturbation between the twins taking up so much focus (yeah I know it's the title of the book).

A mixed bag, but I'd still pick it up if there was phys in english.
yeap SAME! it was sooo annoying to the whole need to share her sister getting fucked stupid as hell like wtf? and WAY?
 

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