imo this story really lacks bdsm. It just has abuse juxtaposed with normal sex, which is super disappointing. Not even an abusive sexual relationship either. Literally just abuse. His dom doesn't dominate him at all. i feel kink shamed by the author.
this is the only time I've been in this verse and it makes no sense. It's omegaverse if omegaverse came with stricter rules. no one ones to dominate, not one wants to submit. They just decided jewelry was neccessary. the collar is basically just a wedding ring at best. Through the subs entire heat, no dom/sub stuff goes on and they're happy with it. Why are people doing this? When doms and subs appeared why did people decide that collars and bdsm should happen. No one acts like a sub or a dom either. People only know through scent. Who is the sicko who decided to attach bdsm to what's literally a regular omegaverse?
There should be a permit. Imo when it comes to bdsm stories it's very important not to make it too real, and more than ever everyone needs to be happy to be there and participating because irl that's what bdsm is. It's just larping. Why write a story about people larping when you can write a fantasy story and done. nifty, nifty has bdsm for reference. There needs ot be fetishes involved for something other than a good father to his child and good professional man at least. yeesh.