Kill Me Baby - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Volume 1 Chapter 5 (2008-05)

[MangaDex]

 

[Wolvenworks]

@Mireannea you guys plan to rework all the older chapters?

 

[Mireannea]

@Wolvenworks Yes. We want to remake them for a better reading experience.

 

[daniel11111222]

There's no use in doing that if you don't also proofread.

Page 2: "so I have..." --> "I also have...", or "I have, too..."
"with properly" --> "properly"

Page 6: "I showing you" --> "I show you"

Hyphenation follows complicated rules, but one of the more common tendencies is that hyphens don't often come after vowels, especially if it's a single vowel. E.g. "sponta-neous" would instead be "spon-taneous" or "spontan-eous". Hyphens tend to come after the end of a group of consonants, e.g. "interes-ting" should be "interest-ing", though there are some exceptions (one that almost always happens is that hyphens appear in between repeated consonants, e.g. "let-ters").

These are perhaps too minor to worry about, but in some comic fonts, tildes require bolding to have the same weight as the main font strokes, and commas sometimes are better kerned if they are set 1 or 2 pixels higher.

 

[Mireannea]

Thanks @daniel11111222. I'm not a native speaker nor a grammar nazi (I might even be called the oppposite!) so I can't find the mistakes very well. They will be fixed soon™.

 

[Presea_cousin]

The last fork bender.