Basically, in Baseball, when you tire out, you start to throw poorly. Biggest issue is you lose form and form is important as it doesn't show what pitch your throwing (your disguising your pitches). When you lose form, the hitter can more easily identify what pitch your throwing (aka tipping your pitches). Also, you off speed stuff (curve balls and breaking balls ) lose out on movement which makes them easier to hit as theyre moving slower.I don't know baseball, could someone explain me what is happening?
Thank you very much! Made the changes and gave thanks to you in the credits.For page 19:
You don't get "caught" as a pitcher, you'll tip your pitches. So the old man should say here "You've been tipping your pitches since the fifth!"
For English, Baseball doesn't have points but "runs." So, the old man would be saying "You gave up a run, dumbass!"
Also balls don't float in this instance (though it technically is whats happening), they will "Hang." So she would have said "The ball's been hanging since the fourth pitch (might be inning instead of pitch here as it doesn't make much since unless he's been hanging his pitch since the beginning of basically the game).
For page 20:
"With the remaining pitches that he has left?" would make more sense then "With the remaining balls that he has?"
For Page 21:
"He's started hanging the ball" instead of floating. Or alternative a baseball player would use a slang word like meatball, which is just just means an easy to hit pitch. "It's clear to see he's started to throw meatballs"
She doesnt know the yuri harem power she wields smhKanae, girl..... You would do so well in yuri....... Its not too late to go for the other team
This is what I’m afraid of. He could not pull it ff or something then everyone blames him again and it starts his spiral towards toward the ending we see in the beginning.Is Hiroshi's shoulder going to snap or something? Thats what i'm seeing.
Oh shit no worries!Thank you very much! Made the changes and gave thanks to you in the credits.