Kimi ni Sasageru Otokomae

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Anything in particular that you dislike about it?
The 'ew' part is about the 'I was rejected but i will keep telling this unkown girl I love her until she dates me' trope. I'm ok with his love at first sight, but not with how she changed her mind so quickly about letting him be part of her life. 5 chapters in and this is still not addressed, the story just progresses with pontual events, that barely make the main couple close, still, she is already going to his house to check on him. The bit "I won't text her because one time someone told me my texts were scary for the lack emojis" killed me. May you all have a good read
 
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The 'ew' part is about the 'I was rejected but i will keep telling this unkown girl I love her until she dates me' trope. I'm ok with his love at first sight, but not with how she changed her mind so quickly about letting him be part of her life. 5 chapters in and this is still not addressed, the story just progresses with pontual events, that barely make the main couple close, still, she is already going to his house to check on him. The bit "I won't text her because one time someone told me my texts were scary for the lack emojis" killed me. May you all have a good read
I mean it was highlighted at the beginning that this was the author’s first serialization, so I read it envisioning and trying to understand what kind of idea and what kind of feelings the author wanted to convey to the readers. It was definitely rusty around the edges and had some pacing issues but I saw what they were going for. I understand the “rejected but still pestering and pushing themselves onto mc” troupe but this wasnt exactly one of those as the mc didnt really reject him outright, he was just very direct with his feelings and the mc responded directly allowing him to proceed forward. If it was more fleshed out I can definitely see what the author was going for with the cool attitude for the mc but cut em some slack yeah? No need to spew toxic shit like “ew” to someones first project
 
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I mean it was highlighted at the beginning that this was the author’s first serialization, so I read it envisioning and trying to understand what kind of idea and what kind of feelings the author wanted to convey to the readers. It was definitely rusty around the edges and had some pacing issues but I saw what they were going for. I understand the “rejected but still pestering and pushing themselves onto mc” troupe but this wasnt exactly one of those as the mc didnt really reject him outright, he was just very direct with his feelings and the mc responded directly allowing him to proceed forward. If it was more fleshed out I can definitely see what the author was going for with the cool attitude for the mc but cut em some slack yeah? No need to spew toxic shit like “ew” to someones first project
ok, author-san, "ew" is toxic :dogkek:
 

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