Kimi ni Somaru Monochrome - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - A New World

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This type of fonts spoken by the girl was unnecessary (almost unreadable if you ask me). It's fine to use Times Roman or similar. Also, the pages size are thinner than normal, which made the texts kinda too small to read.
 
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This type of fonts spoken by the girl was unnecessary (almost unreadable if you ask me). It's fine to use Times Roman or similar. Also, the pages size are thinner than normal, which made the texts kinda too small to read.
Sorry abt that, I couldn’t find downloadable raws anywhere so I just took screenshots of each panel. As for the font, ty for the feedback.
 
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Hmm. Looks good but I don't know where this'll lead for now.
Is it going to be a drawing focused manga or lean more into only the girls drawings and their relationship.
She's the hime too right? I wish they focus solely on their interactions, and the real hime and other girls don't just pop from somewhere (if this girl is not).

And relatable dude, I also wish I could just print what I'm thinking, so seeing her drawing ability (even though it's fiction) makes me jealous because I don't have the patience to grind and work on my skills anymore.

Sorry abt that, I couldn’t find downloadable raws anywhere so I just took screenshots of each panel. As for the font, ty for the feedback.
extensions prolly exist to save the og images, ss lose alot of quality.
 
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So, was his previous love in game online, or in real life?
I thought the girl was just an imaginary friend for a sec, its a bit confusing. Chances are its either the main girl or someone else thatll show up later tho.
 
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"Hey, this girl looks just like the one I knew when I was kid, also draws, and her artwork seems familiar for some reason…

"Guess she's some random person I've never met before."
 
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I'm a bit confused with the timeline. Even though it's hinted pretty hard that the childhood princess and this current girl are the same girl, especially by the framing of the intro, we don't have definitive proof yet. However, in the intro it's stated as a "childhood memory", whereas when he meets her it's stated as "seven days ago". We see a marked improvement in his art, so I would lean towards the childhood part, but still odd.

That aside, assuming this is printed in a color magazine, the use of color is really fun, and is a neat way of incorporating the title as a gimmick. I had thought the different font for the girl to mean something ethereal about how she talks, but I got jebaited and I guess it's just how this group fonts women talking.

Are minors even allowed at comiket? Especially in the 18+ areas? :thonk:
 

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