Kimi no Love o Misetekure!

[HawkGoggles]

I don't understand people who criticise this because it didn't developed how they wanted.
Did they fail to notice the author speaking through the main character about how it know all about love stories in manga and how to write them and what works and what not? The whole premise of this story was challenge these conceptions.
The main character even struggle for being forced to swim from the deeps of manga and live the real world and real relationships and Lear how they differed from her fantasies.

The story not going how those people expected was the point, no?

If you simple don't the character this is a different discussion.

A Romance's story are its Characters. its both. Sure there are people that don't like the ploy dynamic outright but I think more people are criticizing how it was handled more so than it being there. For something that was planed from the start it feels really poorly implemented and expressed throughout this entire narrative. This feels like a love triangle where the two opposing sides compromise on their shared love interest and yet the dynamic for all of them doesn't change throughout the entire story. Its both.

 

[holicastral]

A Romance's story are its Characters. its both. Sure there are people that don't like the ploy dynamic outright but I think more people are criticizing how it was handled more so than it being there. For something that was planed from the start it feels really poorly implemented and expressed throughout this entire narrative. This feels like a love triangle where the two opposing sides compromise on their shared love interest and yet the dynamic for all of them doesn't change throughout the entire story. Its both.

FACTS MY BROTHER!!!, the thing sucking is unrelated to its themes, poor execution is the name!

 

[LufisUwU]

Page 1 comments? Recommended. Read this manga.

I just binged it today up to where it proved the Girl's Love tag is totally fair. Not that Sho (the guy) is written poorly either. The author planned the included GL well from the start. Which absolutely made the pacing feel unfamiliar because the destination was not clear and it would be bloat in a purely hetero manga. If you're checking comments to see if it's good to the gays and worthwhile, it very much is good to the gays, and it grows to be worthwhile.

You can and maybe should avoid this spoiler for a twist, but I would have liked a (spoiler) POLYAMORY tag so I could have had more faith in the story and Hoshimi's development. It makes a lot more sense having binged it and seeing the threads spiral towards that tag. After that I think this is a classic for that theme even if the plot crashes and burns after ch 22. For now it's brave and wholesome. The author still has the independent mindset to build what they want, and they trust they'll still have readers after their previous fox-wife manga.

Thank you so much for commenting this. I was scrolling through to see if it was actually girls love, and most of the comments I read weren't very reassuring on that matter. I do like the fact its polyamory, but I honestly was just looking for a story that was completely girls love.