Kiraware Ouji no Yarinaoshi ~Henkyo de Yami Maho o Kiwamete, Saikyo no Kenzoku to Riso no Okoku o Tsukurimasu~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

[MangaDex]

 

[BookQueen]

The brother is gross. How does one rot so early?

 

[RakshaJaeger]

yeah dunno, he leaves happily not caring about what his ex-fiance is really thinking, or about his rotten brother who is sexually abusing his ex personal maids. Way to go

 

[Cz760]

Started okay last chapter, but it seems like the author is too focused on "plot" to focus on the story. Having the age reveal followed by an upskirt was certainly an interesting decision by the author, and by interesting, I mean the feds are probably interested in the contents of their hard drive.

 

[kingdedede]

yeah dunno, he leaves happily not caring about what his ex-fiance is really thinking, or about his rotten brother who is sexually abusing his ex personal maids. Way to go

he doesnt know about his maids being sexually abused, and he wants to distance himself from the scenario to prevent himself from dying again, i think he is doing it pretty logically to be honest. i would be a bit confused as to why the ex-fiance was sticking up for me but he said hes just going to go visit his territory and come back anyway so he can do that when he gets back

 

[RiceIST00]

Started okay last chapter, but it seems like the author is too focused on "plot" to focus on the story. Having the age reveal followed by an upskirt was certainly an interesting decision by the author, and by interesting, I mean the feds are probably interested in the contents of their hard drive.

get a job

 

[rokegle135]

Fucking christ. I thought it had some potential to be fun and enjoyable but with this second chapter it's really showing it's just gonna be middling once again. like I didnt think it was gonna be great but at least good and enjoyable

 

[jrocker]

So similar to every kicked from a hero's party, what's the over under before the king begs his son to come back and become the prince because the "sage" is actually completely useless and causes massive problems when he assaults a noble or princess from a stronger country?

I'm betting 10 chapters

 

[IvanDFakkov]

Mori Kogoro can learn a thing or two about betting from this fella.

 

[elemint5]

The brother is disgusting terrible evil a pervert and disgusting

 

[Karrotx]

Started okay last chapter, but it seems like the author is too focused on "plot" to focus on the story. Having the age reveal followed by an upskirt was certainly an interesting decision by the author, and by interesting, I mean the feds are probably interested in the contents of their hard drive.

Yeah, when I was working on this I was worried for myself. This is dangerous but I'll continue to work on it.

 

[Oklam]

yeah, his kid brother being a massive perv is weird and nobody say anything, the maid dress doesn't fit, look like the same as when her nun dress tear up at the chest, she is supposed to be a maid/body guard/going on a hike but she is given an outfit that tear up as soon as she move a little hard, the girl he see at the guild is definitively his fiance but he doesn't recognize her....
yeah, not much hope for it if that's how author will go about it...

 

[Volttekka]

An actual criticism for the translation: it feels sloppier than the previous chapter, with iffy sentence structure and inconsistent spelling of names

 

[Wolvenworks]

Huh…first time i’ve ever seen someone misspell “disinheritance”.

 

[BGHofoen]

yeah dunno, he leaves happily not caring about what his ex-fiance is really thinking, or about his rotten brother who is sexually abusing his ex personal maids. Way to go

The maids who deserted him as soon as they found out about his darkness attribute? I don't see why he should care about what happens to them in all honesty.

 

[Petrelspymaster]

she the demon princess or something, isn't she

 

[ForTheJerusalem]

Can we get much lower?

 

[neoDrain]

such a braindead story.Even if you were to turn your brain off, the story still feels stupid