Love pages 4 and 5. What an expression. There's something magical about being completely enraptured in your work/craft. It's been so damn long since I've had that kind of focus.
That doesnt help much, if you can pinpoint them I can look into them again. It comes down to how the reader/proofreader reads the lines. It can easily be assumed one character says it all, when its 2 or 3 characters with thoughts mumblings and dialog... which is what happened in c10 I think.
Kinme was talking and the small bubble was the teenage girl mumbling to herself about the boy's weight.
@GodricKharg Sorry, the chapter 8 mess was for Gal Cleaning, for some reason that ch 8 is currently in 10 pieces and its a mess with 4-5 pages every 3 ish weeks. Have no issues with Kirei, love it.