TY for the update, and welcome to the TS community!
Many comments here (on the chapter itself) will be unhelpful complaints, and lack any worthwhile guidance on what to improve.
Ignore those people. They're useless, and only destroy your morale.
Ideas for improvement:
- Get a working keyboard. Even if it's the cheapest keyboard on the planet, it just needs to work.
- With that working keyboard, make sure your words aren't randomly missing letters.
- Get a higher resolution font. It looks like you used MS Paint to enlarge small text.
In the future, if you're considering making a disclaimer page about a problem that
you have the power to fix... then just fix the problem.
I'm looking forward to your next update with whole words and a font that doesn't induce eye strain.
